Hey there! Dev here, thank you for playing my game!
Just a heads up though, Rune and Ellie both use they/them pronouns. You're also not too far from the ending! It's a bit of a prologue to another story, but I hope you enjoy the ending regardless.
A lot of things happened in this story all at once. I feel like the explanation wasn't there so there could be more mystery. It works because I'm interested in the rest but, I felt like a lot of the events weren't connected and were kinda clumped together. I do like how you write the story though, it's not overly descriptive to a T and gets to the point. I like the suspense you portrayed between the main characters and I liked how you described how their magic felt. That was an interesting and good detail to add. Good job on this hope to see more of the story soon!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I completely understand where you're coming from. I left a lot to theorization and speculation in this story by itself on purpose, but the clearer explanations will come in later games, slowly but surely. I'm excited to reveal it all lol
For your first game, I like the dark color scheme that gives this story a cool, mysterious vibe, from the characters to the background. I also enjoyed that it retains the element of mystery, and doesn't bombard the reader with details and exposition.
Maybe I'm just oblivious, but I didn't see the twist coming, my bad. If I have something to gripe about, it would be that the character's clothes are a bit too simple for a fantasy setting. Good luck on your next game! ^_^
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Great game. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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Hey there! Dev here, thank you for playing my game!
Just a heads up though, Rune and Ellie both use they/them pronouns. You're also not too far from the ending! It's a bit of a prologue to another story, but I hope you enjoy the ending regardless.
This the last part to the game, ending took my ankles!
So I think I know what the creature is lol
You're absolutely welcome to make any theories, I love to see them lol
I had been about to download this game, but then I saw the bit about strange little town being the prequel. Where can I get it?
Strange Little Town is a sequel that's currently in development! The Forest Deep is the prequel. I'm sorry for any confusion!
Ahhh, thanks for the explanation :-)
No problem!
A lot of things happened in this story all at once. I feel like the explanation wasn't there so there could be more mystery. It works because I'm interested in the rest but, I felt like a lot of the events weren't connected and were kinda clumped together. I do like how you write the story though, it's not overly descriptive to a T and gets to the point. I like the suspense you portrayed between the main characters and I liked how you described how their magic felt. That was an interesting and good detail to add. Good job on this hope to see more of the story soon!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I completely understand where you're coming from. I left a lot to theorization and speculation in this story by itself on purpose, but the clearer explanations will come in later games, slowly but surely. I'm excited to reveal it all lol
For your first game, I like the dark color scheme that gives this story a cool, mysterious vibe, from the characters to the background. I also enjoyed that it retains the element of mystery, and doesn't bombard the reader with details and exposition.
Maybe I'm just oblivious, but I didn't see the twist coming, my bad. If I have something to gripe about, it would be that the character's clothes are a bit too simple for a fantasy setting. Good luck on your next game! ^_^
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback. I'll definitely take that into consideration about the designs in my next project!
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate the video!
It's nice for a first game. I wasn't expecting Judas and them to be who they are, which made it more interesting. 10/10
Thanks so much for playing! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed the game and it's so cool that you made a video on it! I'm seriously super happy lol
I’m glad you enjoyed the video. The story was really good and I’m glad it made you that happy. It’s great to know. :)